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The Steamroom

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Sci-Fi Short Story

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The Steamroom

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May 2025

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The Steamroom is a science fiction short story about a girl named Sequoia who is running away from…something. As she reflects on how she got here, the past becomes more clear, and the future, more terrifying.

The story is written through the perspective of a girl running through the woods, with interspersed flashbacks to her daily life and how events led to her being there. ||Slowly, the story of where the young girl Angelina might have disappeared becomes more apparent, and the true nature of the Isle’s leader, the Kingpin, is revealed.||

The Steamroom was written and edited for a Creative Writing: Poetry and Fiction Workshop class. The original draft was limited to ten double-spaced pages, which was later edited to add more depth and worldbuilding to the story. The story received feedback from other students and the professor between the draft and the final.

The story was originally conceived as a full-length novel, with Sequoia running through the woods as the first scene. I had written parts of that scene and planned out certain parts of the story, but not much else. I decided to see how the story would fare as a short story, with only the essentials included and dispersed between the main scenes. The story worked well in this format, but felt rushed, and essential information was missing to make the plot make sense. The story was then edited to fill in these gaps, which more than doubled its length. However, this gave the story its much-needed exposition to make the ending that much more rich.

This project highlights exceptional storytelling skills, making use of action, suspense, and mystery to tell a compelling story. The world has made many wonder about the inner workings of the Isle, and the characters are credited as fun, believable, and overall quite likable. The story itself also portrays an entire world with many complex, moving parts. Even though some of these things are explored within the story itself, the world leads the reader to believe that the characters have lives aside from the main plot, and that the complicated system they exist in really could stand as an alternative to our own society.

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